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PostSubject: I feel like posting some poems so I will   I feel like posting some poems so I will EmptySat Oct 20, 2007 5:11 pm

Paperbacks (about the boy)

You are a lopsided
smile

Rainy day movies, lines
on the windows

The color in my cheeks

Your eyes opening
beside my head

You are the air moved
by dancers

You make babies breath
sprout from the soil

You carve the night out
of piano keys

You are the folded
pages of books

The ones I’ve read a
thousand times

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In the garden (about the girl)

I liked you better when you were young and dark haired
Face folded in the pages of a book
Rotting on a shelf
Your skin like sand lit by sun
I miss the valleys we made
I miss the green
I miss your long legs and feet on morning floors
I miss that house
Big and drafty, smelling like India
Gardens full of lions and grass above my head
I miss wet vegetable slices in sticky hands
And days that have passed

More here:
http://www.fictionpress.com/u/430441/

If you like any of them, let me know pretty prease.


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gill

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PostSubject: Re: I feel like posting some poems so I will   I feel like posting some poems so I will EmptySun Oct 21, 2007 4:55 pm

Louisette wrote:

You are the folded
pages of books

The ones I’ve read a
thousand times

beautiful.
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I was reading some of your others on that site. You have a way with words, I must say.
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PostSubject: Re: I feel like posting some poems so I will   I feel like posting some poems so I will EmptyMon Oct 22, 2007 4:31 am

excuse me while i salivate
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girloflowers wrote:
excuse me while i salivate
haha is that a good thing?
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PostSubject: Re: I feel like posting some poems so I will   I feel like posting some poems so I will EmptyTue Oct 23, 2007 4:34 am

yeah man you're a sweeet writer Smile

im an apaulling (can't spell) writer
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girloflowers wrote:

im an apaulling (can't spell) writer
I majored in English and can't spell don't worry about it. I have spell check on my computer for everything.
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