Aelwyndaeira
Number of posts : 3720
Age : 44
Location : Hamilton, Ontario
Name : Shauna
Registration date : 2007-03-28
 | | Subject: Twisted Sat May 12, 2007 7:11 am | |
| Twisted up inside
But it's not you...it's not you.
Twisted up inside,
And it's not a metaphor.
Pieces of me aren't right...
Alright?
Just remember my name tonight.
Pieces of me aren't real...
I wish I could feel...
Like other women.
Twisted up inside
But it's not you...it's not you.
Twisted up inside,
And it's not a metaphor.
I wish they could just make it right...
Who are they?
Just remember I love you tonight...
And one day it'll be alright. | |
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PolyphonicThought
Number of posts : 13575
Name : Puff
Registration date : 2007-03-28
| | Subject: Re: Twisted Sat May 12, 2007 10:27 am | |
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Gloomyjewel
Number of posts : 2540
Age : 32
Location : Engerland.
Name : Soraya, Sor, Saf
Registration date : 2007-04-16
| | Subject: Re: Twisted Sat May 12, 2007 11:16 am | |
| I like it. It flows well, and I understood it quickly. | |
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Aelwyndaeira
Number of posts : 3720
Age : 44
Location : Hamilton, Ontario
Name : Shauna
Registration date : 2007-03-28
| | Subject: Re: Twisted Sun May 13, 2007 3:34 pm | |
| Thanks! Understood it quickly? LOL....  | |
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