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Age : 29
Location : Miami
Name : Mandy!
Registration date : 2007-04-20

PostSubject: Crappy Poem   Tue Feb 19, 2008 5:07 am

this is the result of my 7 AM stress and upsetness. Hurray.

We'll bite our tongues
We'll let this silence engulf us
and whisper in the dark

An unfinished symphony
interrupted melodies and unspoken words
linger in the air

lipstick traces
secrets and sacred spaces
vacant of warmth

laughter painted on a smile
I thought you were going to stay a while...
But you never came.

The memories are lullaby's
tainted sweetly with the lies
goodbye my dear, goodbye

tis crap...but I needed to vent.
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PostSubject: Re: Crappy Poem   Tue Feb 19, 2008 5:09 am

i actually like it

its sad but its cool
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Name : Kayla
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PostSubject: Re: Crappy Poem   Tue Feb 19, 2008 6:44 am

I honestly enjoyed reading it. Not bad for 7 am.
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